Virtual Victim Board ~ Crossroad 2 Decision

Site Admin Anmeldungsdatum: 14.01.2007 Beiträge: 408 Wohnort: Münster

Hm jo noch ein älterer Song in meinem alten "Schreibstil"...ich find ihn rundum net so gelungen, den Refrain find ich aber super Smile

naja vll gefällt er euch ja trotzdem Wink

1. Strophe:
I can’t resist this might
There’s nothing I’ve not tried
What have I done?
Why have I been punished by the sun?
I’m just a shadow
I and myself have a row

Refrain:
The persons I loved are not here for me
Am I to weak to be?
The persons I loved are not here
When I look in a mirror, I see a crystal tear
The persons I loved are no more
What am I living for?
The persons I loved are no more in these world
Help me, my body curled!

2. Srophe:
Look into my eyes
Look, my spirit cries
A horrible thought entered my head
Is there anyone understanding my dread?
Blood spills not far from wounds
Am I able to cross these bounds?

Refrain

3. Strophe:
Is it to late to change my mind
Or am I just to blind
Is it right that I am born
Do u see the thunderstorm?
I am isolated
Thats why I am desperated!

Refrain

Outro:

The bottom is slippery and red
The devil has me led
Now I´m with the persons I love...

Anmeldungsdatum: 07.02.2007 Beiträge: 264 Wohnort: Dortmund

Hi Oliver

Den Song könnte ich mir gut als gitarrenlastige Ballade im Metalbereich vorstellen.

Mir gefällt nicht nur der Refrain sondern bis zum "Ende" der ganze Text!!